5 Sentence Challenge by Kiran

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A little boy is holding a big red apll. There is loads of froot and veghdbools. The shop is in a beautiful glowing village. There is a big tol shelf with boxis in it. There is a brown kind cuddly dog.

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3 comments on “5 Sentence Challenge by Kiran

  1. Kiran, you have used some lovely adjectives – brown, kind, cuddly. I especially like your sentence about the “beautiful, glowing village”. Well done!

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