5 Sentence Challenge by Alfie


The cereal is on top of the shelf and the shelf is big. The dog is sitting down in the shop. The little boy has got an apple in his hand. The shop has got sum grapes up on the roof. The fruit is in a box there is lemons. The lady has got a bag with some frot. The man has got a smile on his fas. There is a sin with frot on. The boy has got the dog on a led.


2 comments on “5 Sentence Challenge by Alfie

  1. Alfie, you have looked at this picture closely and described it well! Next time, see if you can use some adjectives to help describe the picture.

  2. I think my favourite part of this story Alfie is you mentioning the grapes. Not many people spot there are some there. Well done!

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