5SC In the tunnel by Eli

Darck darck spooky and scary like no one had ever been there. It was smelly and slimy. Loads of spooky noises he really wants to scream. But all the spiders will know where he is and the bats, there was no way out.  He had to follow the light but where was the light, he had no idea.

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One comment on “5SC In the tunnel by Eli

  1. Hello Eli,
    Oh my gosh! you have the start of a very scary story here!
    I love the way that you have described what you see and hear and smell – great work, as I feel as if I am in the tunnel too!
    I hope you keep on with this story and find your way out 🙂
    thank you,
    MrsP Team 5SC

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