5SC In the tunnel by Charlee

It was scare and it mak me to crie. And to screen. And It is mistrors and then a boy went into the tunnel and then the boy said Im not scad to go in the tunnel it is not scree said the littal girl said to the boy.


One comment on “5SC In the tunnel by Charlee

  1. Hello Charlee,
    You must be in a horrible, scary tunnel – you poor thing 😦
    I hope you stop crying and don’t scream and find your way out!
    Don’t forget your full stops at the end of each sentence, it makes your writing easier to read if you remember them 🙂
    Thank you,
    MrsP Team 5SC

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