5SC The Blue Cockerel by Luca

I think it is lonely if he was real.
It looks posh and proud.
It is proudly standing amongst the people.
He stands out in the sitee.
I think it is missing its famly.

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One comment on “5SC The Blue Cockerel by Luca

  1. Fantastic sentences Luca. You have thought of some interesting words to describe the cockerel. I agree with you I think he looks very proud standing up straight looking out over the square. Maybe next time you could make your sentences longer by using a connective to join your ideas together. E.g. I think it is lonely because it is missing it’s family.

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