5SC- At the market by Freddie

The market sells lots of frost and vegtables.
It smells very sweet.
It’s rilly bizy.
It’s such a popular place.
It lookes very culfel.

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One comment on “5SC- At the market by Freddie

  1. Well done Freddie on your 5 Sentence Challenge. You have used full stops and capital letters for your sentences which is great. You have also used lots and lots describing words too like, ‘sweet’ and ‘colourful.’ These make your writing more interesting and help me to imagine what the market looks like.

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