5SC – At the market by Eli

At the market it smells fishy when you go parst the fish counter. In the vegeball secshon theres green brokely and red tomatos. They sell bouncy footballs and washing up likwede. At the side of the cachear theres batterys. Theres people shopping in the supermarket.


One comment on “5SC – At the market by Eli

  1. Wow Eli what a wonderful 5 Sentence Challenge, you have really used your senses to make your writing exciting. I really like the way you have talked about the smelly fish and the red and green vegetables. These help me to see and smell the market in my imagination. You have also used the word ‘bouncy’ which is an adjective for the football which again makes this more interesting to read.

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